Have you ever fallen in love?
Who has not suffered a loving Disappointment?
Who has not a second chance to loving?
When you are growing up you start to know a new World. New experiences and feelings you will live. One of those is the love in a relationship. All of us knows that love can change people. The thing is that two minds can not think the same. Then some argument ,and some disappointments you would have. Even you would broke up the relationship. But always there exists the chance that the love returns to our lives. Giving us a second chance to love or the posibility to start over again. Taking care to do not do the same mistakes that you did before.
Love is like a seed wich you have to give love and care .in order that grow through the time.
On this poem the rose wich had grew in the darkness corner it is like someone who have not give a chance to love, and when it is finally founded a new life being. The person that fall in love can not belive how strong it is. By the way the doors of the love are never closed, so do not try to avoid it because you can not do this.
Love must be a selfless affection for that reason it is so special and dangerous too. A person could become into a better if found real love.
Like the rose that passed from the darkside to sunshine.
You use too many dots, which are unnecessary in many casesi,in these paragraph for example:
ReplyDelete"When you are growing up you start to know a new World. New experiences and feelings you will live. One of those is the love in a relationship. All of us knows that love can change people. The thing is that two minds can not think the same."
In somecases i didn´t understand what you were tryng to say.
But I like a lot how you talk about love, because you explaina that a person could be better just because finds a real love.
I like how you start the questions and how we’re evolving in the love, like you said in the end when the rose passed from de dark side to the sunshine. Be careful with the spelling of some words like “belive” and “posibility”
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ReplyDeleteYou really knew how to explain the poem!
That's good!
I personally think that give a second chance, is something Pretty hard to do. I`ve done it. It was too hard for me, but finally i did it, because everyone needs a second chance in our lifes.
Well, I found some mistakes...
For example, when you are talking or writing something about "LOVE", you can not use the word "THE" before the word "LOVE". I am not sure why, but the thing is that you can not do it...
In the part that you wrote "...When it is finally founded a new life being..."
What do you mean when you say "FOUNDED"?
You mean "FOUND"?
Do you remember this?... Find -> Found
Well, I could understand the whole text, and that's the most important thing! ;D